Andeshey
Tera gham hai toh lagta hai mohabbat bhi hai
Warna phirtey hain sar-e-daar diwaane kitne!
Aa-gahi kaun bataaye ke hotaa kya hai???
Ek jalwey ko tere lagte hain zamaane kitne!
Ashk chalka ke tujhe khud se ganwa dun kaise
Ik mulaqaat banaati hai bahaane kitne!
Daur-e-haazir mein nahin chalte puraane sikkey
Warna aahon mein gade hain yan khazaane kitne!
Ik taraf shor, kahin aag lagi hai dekho
Ik taraf pyaar se jalte hain na-jaane kitne!
Jaan deni hai toh dedenge padi hai kis ko
Naaz dushman ke humein aur uthaane kitne!
Tujhko choo ley toh teri zaat munnawar ka de
Dekh ASIM mein karishmey hain najaane kitne!
Tujhko kehta hai koi baat kabhi maan hi le
Dekh ASIM ke andeshey hain puraane kitne!
- Khan M. Asim...24/02/2011...4:03AM!
Word Meaning:
sar-e-daar - On the platform ready to be hanged
Aa-gahi - happening in future
andeshey - instincts, thoughts
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10 comments:
Nice work.. I liked the picture more. :P Well, not the best from your pen, but still it carries the distinct asim flavour.. Keep the good work on... :)
Cheers
arpita
Jaise log waisi pasand! those who don't understand what does the words means can just go with rhythms.... well i know i hv written it better!
Asim ji I dnt expect such immature reaction from you. Your comment is reflection of arrogance... which is a killer of an artist.. Wish you all the best..
Its not arrogance! its confidence... i can sense what i wanted to write is conveyed with the words... m not artist... i express my feelings, the way i can.. i feel i have conveyed them better way... its not necessary if u dont like it, i will say i ll try better, ofcourse one should try to better it... but i know i wrote it well, so why should i say i ll try... its good.... n m confident about my words... not responsible for ur likes n dislikes!
ohh... shayar sahab aap to naraz ho gae... Hum to aapki shayari ke mureed hai aur hamesha rahenge.... :)
shayari samajhni hai, toh pehle urdu seekho, uske baad kehna ka achchi hai ya buri hai... its not words which carries in a ghazal, emotions are also there, words can be different but emotion can not be... so to understand emotions better... u better learn urdu!
Aapne Hariprasad chaurasiya ka naam to suna hi hoga... Par kya aapne Hari Sadu ka naam suna hai?? hahahaa
Ya i know, name of ur forefather!
BAD
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