Bharam
Waham hai guman hai yeh kaisa bharam hai
Mohabbat mein hum pe sitam hi sitam hai
Jo maqtal mein nazrein ghumake yun dekha
Sanam hi sanam hai, sanam hi sanam hai
Faqeeri o ghurbat ka yeh muamla hai
Pasheman pasheman, sharam hi sharm hai
Raftaar dheemi hai inn baadalon ki
Musafir pe ab toh zulam hi zulam hai
Nishana bana bas mera aashiyaan hai
Ke dujon pe uska karam hi karam hai
Tumhe chaand choona hai kaise chuoge
Zamane mein har sun dharam hi dharam hai
Haan duniya ko jannat bana loge apni
Yeh Asim tumhara bharam hi bharam hai
- Khan M. Asim...7:25PM...15/10/2009...Train
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4 comments:
waah waah......ye hui na baat....keep it up....halka sa meter error hai....magar behtreen manne men gurez nahi...tumhari padhi hui sarshrestha rachna hai dost....badhai...sabse acca sh'er ye laga..
Tumhe chaand choona hai kaise chuoge
Zamane mein har sun dharam hi dharam hai
Nishant kaushik
www.taaham.blogspot.com
thank you nishant, i do accept there must be some problem with meter but ll edit with time, but yeah let me tell you, although i have written it but its not the best one, i hv written better than this earlier n the best one is yet to come :)keep reading and posting, thnx again... good u make critical comments , i like it!
from where u got all these thought may allah will help u to grow in ur life and do keep on posting shayari and a poem i relly love to read ur poem .I just dnt have word to express how much i like it ....
awezum work asimm...
luv dis ghazal....
peace b upon u
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