sins n signs: Mein aadmi hun achcha bekaar keh gaya

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Mein aadmi hun achcha bekaar keh gaya

Ghusse mein aaj gul ko mein khaar keh gaya

Mein aadmi hun achcha bekaar keh gaya

Uski mohabbaton ko kar kar mein bar-taraf

Wafa-shuaar dil ko ghaddaar keh gaya

Jo muatbar nahin they unko lagaya dil se

Sharam-o-haya thi jinko siyaahkaar keh gaya

Karte talash manzil raahon mein jo bikhar gaye

Kaise mein hoslon ko bedaar keh gaya

Karne lagi jo wazeh woh humko bayaan apna

Moti se aansuon ko adakaar keh gaya

Na intezaar kal ka na maazi ko yaad rakhkha

Bekhud mein yunhi usko bezaar keh gaya

Kya kya bataon yaaro kisko sunaon dukhda

Mein nek-dil sanam ko gunaahgaar keh gaya

Usse karein kya shikwa usne thi ki wafayein

Apne hi mein shubon ko wafadaar keh gaya

Bas ik nazar inayat hum par zaroor karna

Kya kya pashemaan ASIM, Sarkaar keh gaya!

- Khan M. Asim... 27/07/2011... 2:37AM!

6 comments:

Arpita Sarkar said...: This comment has been removed by the author.; 10:15 AM
Arpita Sarkar said...: Cute pic... Nice poem.. has a deep meaning, baaki aap to genius ho hi.. and yaa you have to take copyright for using my Surname :P :) :)

Keep smiling and stay blessed asim..

Cheers
arpita; 10:18 AM
Asim Khan said...: Thank You Arpi :) yeah i need to copyright ur surname... to whom i should speak for this :P; 10:34 AM
mystical mistigris said...: This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.; 9:03 PM
mystical mistigris said...: Barricade speaks:: Apology so nice can tempt anyone to commit the same mistake twice.Squeaking mouses beware this lion roars, only seldom comes the moment of meowy remorse.
Stay united coz the vocabulary of love starts from L and ends at X (pun intended).
I am happy for you two :)
This is a tweaked version better delete the previous one!!; 1:05 AM
Asim Khan said...: @Barricade: Thoda action thoda jackson budhdha hoga tera baap! "jitna samajh aaya bata dia..."

hahahahahaha... lolzz...

Well i do understand... yeah but as u said tempting to commit the same mistake again.. does not mean that u ll b rewarded the same. it may be fatal. When it comes to L & X.... X is a way of expression.. but L is something deeper...!

anyways thank you for ur precious comments and the moments u spent on this page, screeching ur head to type something which may go above the top. It "does"! am still thinking on ur lines... hahahahaha; 1:06 AM

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Arpita
ASIM KHAN. It was two years back in 2006 winters when I and asim became frnds on Orkut, and least two of us have thought that we’ll become best of friends. I need not to describe how asim is or special traits of him. His friends know him better that he is gem of person, awesome shayar (new ppl reading this, do read his blog and u'll be delighted.. really try IT! ) fabulous singer ,... philosopher of gen next.... very knowledgeable (that even if you are sitting at Nariman point with him asim may start teaching you world history or discuss life Alexandra or ohh look I forgt the names), So now! I think I really don’t need to tell how asim is. what more shud I say … he’s one person with very strong convictions. A true frnd, true human being.. You truly deserve best in life coz you are the BEST ....My TRUE friend...

Obaid Azam Azmi
Urdu Poetry in Mumbai/Bombay India:

In dinoN Urdu Shairy meiN jo chand Naujawaan apni jaanib logoN ki tawajjoh Mabzool karaane meiN Kaamiyaab nazar aate haiN un NaojawaanoN meiN Asim Khan aik achchhe aor suljhe huey Shair haiN. unki Shairi achchhii aor sachchi Shairi hai.Is ka isteqbaal kiya jaana chaahiye.
Obaid Azam Azmi
Mumbai - India
08/02/2009

sweety:

asim khan ya choudhary... ye sawaal maine usse kafi baar pucha tha... usne kuch bataya tha par ab woh mujhe yaad nahi mujhe uske shayari itne kuch samjh nahi atey.. par itna samajh pai hu dus pandrah salon me ki asim naam hi kafi hai.. use samajh ne ke liye.. jo usse ek baar baat karle toh unhe lagega ki ye insaan shayad kuch jyada hii badi badi batain karta hai.. par main bata du ki woh jo kehta hai woh karke dikhata hai.. log use shayad philosopher kahte hai, par mere liye toh woh philosophy ki book hi lagta hai....mujhe aaj bhi achi tarah se woh din yaad hai jab maine use ek problem me dekha tha during his junior colg, jab usne mujhe bataya ki he has changd his stream, i was stunned, par woh usne kafi asani se kiya tha, aur ab woh khus hai apne uss decision se, ab bhi uske life me kuch ups n downs chal rahe hai, n i now kno dat he vl overcum dis 2....all d best asim.. tc n keep in touch.

S.IMRAN
7/15/07

For asim-Truly a jack of all trades-I respect him for his upperhand over religious as well as worldly knowledge-A gem in true sense ...and I m not exxagerating!Have a terrific command over urdu....I respect u for this!Having an excellent P.R and against pyaar!Have a soft corner for sania and constantly after me to shift focus from maria to sania though he don't understand much of tennis..joking!Latest crush on hukka and favourite hang out mogal sarai!Received much flak for his hawas ka nanga naanch on alibaug beach (guys for that video do contact me)!He is desperate to do it again but on goa's beach and this time searching for companion ,for this he has uploaded his profile on shaadi.com,bharatmatrimony there r even more....................again joking!In plans to launch an agency and constantly struggling for it!Lasltly all in all a great guy and a good human being and ready to help even at the stroke of midnight!Wil attain great heights inshallah...........Last but not least Maria rocks!Take care ..
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This one coming straight from my heart to ur scraps!**When journalist's action speaks louder than words!!**
Saddam got hanged
bivash got banged
During the lec on homosexuality
Asim showed his abilities
To overcome the serpent and crush his mighty fangs!causing the lec to be jammed!
Asim's retaliation came out of miscommunication
during an ongoing contemporary session
Mutely standing Sagoo saw suitly dressed asim turning zidane and proved that mood swings whether it be a world cup zidane or our very own Asim khan!!
Because we don't learn contemporary issues..we make it!Forgive me as it is just a figment of imagination!Don't mind. Three cheers for ur act !!
1/14/07

shahzad

he is sincere , very friendly and very nice human being. god made very few human like asim , he is very hardworking guy , and he never see behind onece he decide to go ahead .

Priyanka

Asim ke baare me kya kahu jitna bolu utna kam hai. He's a very sweet frnd of mine. He's a great poet 1st of all. den he writes very well, he's a gr8 philosopher. Very honest Man n very helpful alwayz..He's a fun loving guy n itz fun 2 b around wid. He's very entertaining n alwayz guides me alot both profesionaly n personaly.The 1 thing i lik bout him is tht he's very Versatile n is very much focused on his goals. He's very hardworking n he proved himself in lyf. He did everything on his own whatever it is studies, job or anything.......He's a perfect man. hmmm..... n ya he's very religious as well. N whoever will b his wife in future she'll b d luckiest........ ma bhai! lolz! I Alwayz wish him luck n hope he gets everything in lyf, may his dreamz cum true n I pray god tht keep him Happy n Smiling forever............

Lokesh

ASIM !!!!!!!!!!!!!The real diomand.The most sweetest person i have ever meet.The most gental personality.The most caring friend.The most helping friend.The true friend.The idol guy for friendship................Thanks to the god for giving me ,such a wonderfull friend.....God bless u ASIM..may all u r dreams come true.................. may you get your true love all the best.

Renu Nauriyal

O.k Do you remember yourself In SY. I do......front row, keen,trying to go well but so many anxieties. By TY we had a different Asim in the journalism class, so much more at ease and sure of himself.

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Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Mein aadmi hun achcha bekaar keh gaya

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